Descendant of the stars chapter 5: Doom

Author : JetxLucy

Date sent : September 28, 2012

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Category : Epic

Description : Vertrou finds true love, and Nocere and Lojalis relationship is sparking. Bambi and Faline are now proud parents to two fawns, Geno and Gurri. Ronno and May seemed to have split up, leaving May with all the children, and Ronno to go else where. Still the forest seems peaceful until Ronno decides to get even with Bambi, and a strange buck makes a disturbing appearance ....

Length : Very short -

Characters :

Lojalis	Ronno	Faline	Friend Owl	Thumper's Da...
The Great Pr...	Mena	Bluebelle	Bambi Jr	Flower	Nocere
Bambi	Thumper	Bambi's moth...

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Descendant of the stars chapter 5: Doom

By JetxLucy

This fanfic was rated PG (Parental guidance suggested).

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JetxLucy	September 28, 2012

Thanks for that advice


MyLittle World	September 28, 2012

The rut has no special date, it's just a period of time when deer mate.
The chapter was interesting, but again, I think it's all going on to fast. Half the time, you don't know what's going on. Give your characters room to breath, describe their feelings if needed, but don't rush through the story you want to tell.

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