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| March 22, 2013 | ||
MW - yeah. XD after writing it occurred to me that "If they have THAT
many, how many must have been BIRTHED?" Anyway, I figure that the doe
will have a crush on Raven, but beyond that, I don't have much beyond
a rough design. |
| March 22, 2013 | ||
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I'm sorry I can't say much now, but after just getting home from my
work placement, I'm not very creative. (Plus, I saw a hamster die
today after we've been trying to save her the whole week...nothing
unexpected, but depressing.) The chapter was funny, it made me giggle. ^^ I really, really liked the serious yet funny tone it had, the renders, the bits with Lola and Blossom and the talks of the females. ^^ It was great work, as always. ^^ |
| March 22, 2013 | ||
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Saske: YES! I wanted to add some original lines from the film in this
since it was inspired by 2 scenes from the first film: the scene when
Bambi's mother is taking Bambi up to the meadow for the first time,
and the scene where Bambi realizes his mother has been shot and
instead follows his father. Very powerful themes, but since they're
also very dramatic, I decided to throw Thumper's wife and kids jokes
in there, too, so the chapter is both funny and serious. And...since I
don't want their mates to be excluded, I threw them a scene, too! I'm
happy you like it! Lola and Blossom will be returning in Chapter 7
![]() Feather: I've never had success with breeding rabbits. I know what a pain in the butt it is to try and raise baby bunnies, their mortality rates are through the roof. The 67 kids things was meant to be a running gag throughout the story, showing that not only does Thumper and his mate produce and successfully raise so many offspring, but the fact that Thumper has no idea who his children are made for a very funny, though impractical, theme. And refresh my memory about what
you wanna make for Raven? I need to know of all extra special guest
starring OCs now because they'll be appearing in Chapter 7.Falinelover: Thank you! She's a giant pain to render, but she is fun! And I can see Thumper's point of view about Rags. After all, a bobcat's favorite prey are rabbits and hares. Thumper knows this ![]() |
| March 22, 2013 | ||
Wonderful chapter! ^^ But for me, it only reiterated the grim truth of breeding rabbits: out of those sixty-four, een in a domestic setting, about thirty - at best - would make it through. ... And can I still make that for for Raven you gave me permission for some year ago? xD |
Feather: I just finished chapter 6 and sent it in, and chapter 7 is going to have all the special guest OCs (plus I might bring back the guest OCs in a later chapter to participate in one of Gurri and Syndica's challanges/dares). But you have until I complete chapter 7 to get your OCs in!