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| August 26, 2011 | ||
Btw, I just wanted to say that I love the little Harry Potter
reference in there xD "Not my daughter, you witch!" |
| August 20, 2011 | ||
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| Lone Wolf who protects others |
An awsome story to be honest i was exspecting Jiro to be the one to
kill her but i can see that Zuri ahd a close relationship so her
sudden snap of anger would exsplain alot. Great work Nama |
| August 19, 2011 | ||
I originally wanted Judas to be the one who has to kill Zuri, but I
like Ari delivering the final blow much better. Because she's such a
sweet character and to see her snap like that was just more of a WOW
thing than if it were Judas to do it. And good :3 Judas would really appreciate staying in touch with his family, especially after this |
| August 19, 2011 | ||
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Thank you! I was kinda wondering about your reaction to Ari killing
Zuri, I thought you might have wanted someone else to do the deed. But
yeah, poor Ari. It was so sad writing the beginning. Oh she does, she tries to stay in contact with her family as much as possible. |
| August 19, 2011 | ||
Awww that was so good! Poor Ari, the last she saw of Kayode, he was
saying goodbye to her. She never would've expected to have her brother
be murdered, by their own sister at that! I'm glad that Ari did avenge
Kayode's death though. I'm sad, though, that she's left the pride
behind. But now she has a greener future ahead of her! She better come and visit Judas though! xD |